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The United Nations brings great things to the table. Yes everyone yearns for world peace, but we cannot achieve it by only caring for our respective countries. The U.N requires stronger countries to help empoverished countries . The U.N also provides organization that previously was unheard of. They provide a structured way to accomplish a goal as large as world peace. This is a huge improvement from wearing Tye-dye shirts and throwing up peace signs. The U.N is finally proposing a plan of action for achieving world peace, allowing its members to check in on the groups progress by checking the different sections of the U.N website. Overall, the good intentions of the U.N make it a good thing, but the organization that accompanies it gives us hope that the U.N can reach their goals with co-operation from all countries.