UN Paragraph revision

Despite the disorganized website, it is clear that the UN is a very good organization, and will not do any harm. One could argue that they are inactive, and cannot exert any justice on the world, but it urns out they are just what we needed. The UN has made may decisions for a long time, consistently, and employs their own peace corps, made up of soldiers from many of the different countries who hold seats at the UN. It is these many countries that give the UN its strength: strength not only in numbers, but also in the wide varieties of perspectives and cultures offered. This large array of countries will help the UN be successful, as if one countries breaks the peace, like Germany did, there are many, many other countries to help stop them. The League of Nations did not work because it had so few countries, so that when Germany decided to take over Europe, it was difficult to do anything. The humanitarian missions of the UN are perhaps even better than their declarations. Before the UN, it was up to small, private organizations to deliver assistance to those in need, and floundering countries were virtually left on their own. Gaining help from a large, unified organization can only improve impoverished or war-torn areas.