Wednesday, September 16, 2009
DIVERSITY
In our previous encounters with diversity in different empires, it has had different influences on their success as an empire. The Ottoman empire wasn't as diverse as the other empire. Them not being diverse resulted in them being a wildly expanded group spreading through the Black sea and the Caspian sea. Their influence on expanding their religion and not being as diverse as other groups helped them expand. The Mughal empire resulted in being more diverse because Akbar was a more tolerant ruler. This way of ruling resulted in a least expansion of their land although under Akbar's reign they didn't have problems. In conclusion, the Ottoman empire weren't as divorced as other groups which resultied in a wider expansion. The Mughal empire were a tolerant group which lead to a empire that didn't have as many problems.
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That last sentence you wrote The Mughal empire were a tolerant group which lead to a empire that didn't have as many problems, I think that you could have elaborated on that and specified what some of those problems were. Also you could have gone on to talk about Aurangzeb's rule and how he tried to abolish diversity in the Mughal Empire. Overall though I though it was really good, I liked how you went into detail about the geography of them spreading out
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